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I am (the better half) ((answer to challange part 1)) |
Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
I am Caring, an Angel to those in need I wonder Will the world find peace or will I always be needed I hear Happiness and sadness I see Pain and healing I want to heal the world I am Caring, an Angel to those in need I pretend to be superhuman and heal the worlds pain I feel others souls I touch others minds I worry that the world will only get worse I cry when I feel the pain in others I am Caring, an Angel to those in need I understand the world is flawed I say those flaws can be fixed I dream to touch the world in my own unique way I try to give hope to those in need I hope my efforts are not in vain. I am Caring, an Angel to those in need May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Most excellent, I think you met the challenge well, I'm off to read your other half. |
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Strosek Member
since 2000-04-08
Posts 61Fourways, Gauteng, South Africa |
Ok, I thought I better explain my actions for the three posts. Any way, I goanna post this note in all three poems, just in case people decide to read them in a different order or something like that. The reason for the three posts work like this: (My Better half) This is me 90% of my life, how I devote my time and my view towards others.) (My other half) as nay of you have seen with my other poems I went through a very dark time in my life, this is 10% of my life which I let free everyonce in a while. (My Whole) This explains my view on myself at all times this is my reason for doing the things I do. Thanks for hearing me out. May the light of day always shine during the darkest of nights. |
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twinsgd Member
since 2000-02-13
Posts 416Ontario,Canada |
WTG Strosek , a good better half no doubt about it Jack |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
A very good side indeed... I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
ok. now u've sparked my curiosity.. gotta read ur other half.. very good.. *_^ Lynne |
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JOY 14 Senior Member
since 1999-09-22
Posts 1419Wisconsin USA |
What a good way to do it! Now, why didn't I think of that? hee.hee. Joy |
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