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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
Revisited Again The call came again haunting, almost imperceptible. Was I sleeping, or dreaming seems my eyes were wide open. It's a song, maybe not perhaps just a phantom. A perception, nay a feeling subconscious, even lower. Like a ghostly memory not really a memory at all. Awakening with fading dreams that become quickly forgotten. Not sure, even if ever the experience happened. Was it a voice, a scream or a correcting whisper? Perhaps, the voice of God speaking reality into existence. Perhaps, just poetic madness a call no others may hear. Tell me friend, do you hear it soft whispers beneath the waves? Do you awakened with almost voices can you hear, believe that you hear? bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Bleeding. Very well expressed! Denise |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Yep seems you got a strong muse there bleeding. Use it well Jon |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Very nicely done, I enjoyed. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Hi bleeding. Super job here! It's not unusual for us to doubt at times, then a blessing comes along, a song (or poem) given, our spirits are raised and we no longer question our inner strength, knowing "He Is". Great poem. Makes us stop and think. Thank you for this one. Marcy |
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Broken_Winged_Angel Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994Small Town, Somewhere |
Very nicely expressed. Thankyou for sharing it. I awake to a world I don't want. There is no transition for me. I am in heaven. I am in hell. |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
greatly appreciate the input, my friends. thank you each bleeding... "Tis ink coming from his arm, Captain!" |
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