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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Wanting you, but not needing heartache. Needing you, but not wanting the hurt. Searching your soul with all that I am, Only to find hidden secrets. Loving you, but not receiving affection. Hurting me, and you don't even know. Breaking what is left of my ravaged heart, There is nothing I can do. sKiTtLeS~ |
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blackhalo Member
since 2000-02-15
Posts 467Denver, CO |
so much feeling and tru inner thoughts expressed so well in just a few words. nice work alicia |
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ESP Member Elite
since 2000-01-25
Posts 2556Floating gently on a cloud.... |
That's alot of emotion in so few words....wow! I like it!! Love and hugs, Lizzie "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight." |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Thank you girls. Sometimes it doesn't take many words to express what's straight from the heart. Thanks again. sKiTtLeS~ |
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Kitty_Fett Junior Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 35 |
A vvvveeerryyy true aspect on love. It has its hard days and its mountains, but somehow we always come through. -Kitty |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I'm sure most of us can relate to this! Well done, Skittles! Denise |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Kinda sad but nicely put Skittles. Jon |
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sKiTtLeS Member
since 2000-04-12
Posts 113wisconsin, u.s.a. |
Thank you all. Your comments are very welcome here, and appreciated. sKiTtLeS~ |
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wonderous Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 75 |
Wanting you, but not needing heartache. Needing you, but not wanting the hurt. we ve all been there beautifully put |
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breezeinnc Junior Member
since 2000-04-26
Posts 47USA |
beautiful straight from the heart breezeinnc |
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amazon_lover Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 491Dublin,Ireland |
Hi S..! Its a lovely poem. I've felt the heartache that accompanies with love. I've felt the hurt and pain. But love I've felt above all just gave a vent to all those feelings. In the end I just feel there is only love and not even a trace of hatred. I've given my heart to her and I'll just wait.. Sincerely A_L |
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Yu Lan Senior Member
since 2000-04-13
Posts 1462New Zealand |
agreed. ^_^ all of the above.. hehe.. well said.. Lynne |
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