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DeathTrippy
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since 2000-07-15
Posts 45
WY USA

0 posted 2000-07-15 07:03 PM


Color blasts and spray
Radiant beams
Light calls out to all
Sparkling souls admire
Onlooking soldiers
Americans erupt in joy
As the sky erupts in memory

Dreams of freedom
Bursting forth from opression
A rainbow in the night sky
Violet trails lead
Colorful free men follow
Down the rainbow
Finding golden dreams

Minds of old remembered
Times of old remembered
Fighting for right
Beautiful sentiment
Twinkling in the eye
Children run free
A sybol of victory

Alas, never lasting
But still burns the fire
Fueled by hope
For our children to look back
Respect give and smile
And see us PATRIOTS


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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2001-06-27 11:34 PM


It's not too late now!
Dopey Dope
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San Juan, Puerto Rico
2 posted 2001-06-29 03:04 AM


No, it's not.  

Very well done. I liked it a lot!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
3 posted 2001-06-30 11:49 AM


It's not all fireworks and picnics is it?  It's not too late to remind the children of the real reason that we celebrate this important holiday!
Great poem!

Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2006-07-04 01:59 PM



Great piece ... deserves a ride to the top~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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