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patricianne
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since 2000-05-04
Posts 66


0 posted 2000-05-11 11:58 AM


To me this poem is about the ultimate experience of Mothers Day, I hope you like.

              Our Sweet Sunflower

It's so HOT
Bees droning outside the window
Sundrenched,dry,HOT.

They are so brave, these two.
Daring, yet afraid.
Risking the miracle.

Midwife calm
Smiling gently.

The moment comes-then goes.
Again
And again.
We're all ready,
All but one.

Sweating, crying
Hoping,pleading.
So brave.

All the effort, all the pain-
Pure joy,
Tears of love.

She has arrived.
"Sunflower", says her Dad.

Wonderful peace.
The future is in our hands.

© Copyright 2000 patricianne - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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since 1999-05-26
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-05-11 12:24 PM


Beautiful! Yes, this is what Mother's Day is all about.... thank you....
hot potato
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since 2000-04-19
Posts 6

2 posted 2000-05-11 04:26 PM


so sweet, you know I had to cry
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