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mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18
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0 posted 2010-12-10 04:36 AM



Every year i get the job to carry out a six foot long Christmas tree,
boxed and stored away in the garage.next to a case of Chablis .
its been our tradition to set up and decorate the tree we all agree.
I string the lights the wife and kids hang the ornaments, whoopee!
we celebrate the grand lighting, with Christmas music from our MP3
hot chocolate with candy canes, for all a job well done we decree
how joyful and comforting it is to celebrate beside the Christmas tree
the birth of the new born king.


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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-12-10 05:13 AM


This poem transmits the perfect serenity we all should be granted on Christmas.

Just beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2010-12-10 07:04 AM


What a beautiful scene...I can really see you all doing this...lovely. Thank you for sharing a bit of your tradition with us.
easy1
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since 2010-05-22
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3 posted 2010-12-11 10:58 AM


Excellent.
greytree
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Wales
4 posted 2010-12-14 11:21 AM


A brilliant poem, yet (without wanting to be harsh) I felt that 'whoopee' was more to force a rhyme then the rest which flows so naturally.  Otherwise, as I said, really brilliant!
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