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greeneggs-n-ham
Junior Member
since 2007-06-05
Posts 14


0 posted 2007-12-15 01:28 PM



I wrote this last night, and i thought it was kind of cute, so i decided to post it. Its not great, but with what i've been writing lately, its not too bad.(im in a writers slump)
What do you think?

Dearest Santa

Dearest Santa,
This year Ive been good
Ive said thank you
Just like I should

I havent shouted
Havent cried
...maybe a little
But I havent lied!

I walked my dog
I combed my hair
I even wore
Clean underwear

Im not the one
Who started that fight
I gave my sister
A hug last night

I said sorry
For kicking her
But you saw that
Im pretty sure

I turned in my work
And all on time
On mothers day I wrote
A cute little rhyme

Ive been patient
Been a good friend
In every line
I was the end

I listened to
My mom and dad
Im on the good list
Ive not been bad

I guess what Im
Trying to say
Ive a request
For Christmas day

When I go downstairs
After youve come
The cookies we left you
Can you save me one?

comments and critics appreciated


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Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
1 posted 2007-12-15 06:49 PM


Enjoyed

Merry Christmas !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ARCTIC WIND

fromme2U
Member
since 2007-11-09
Posts 257

2 posted 2007-12-17 12:26 PM


aw this was too cute!
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