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Solstice Son
since 2000-09-19
Posts 469

0 posted 2000-11-21 03:40 PM apologies up front to all the Rogers and Hammerstein devotees....Sol

The cat ate my roses
there's holes in my mittens
the gal at the bookstore
has left me quite smitten
so I go buy books
on my cat's and knitting
but she's dating a doctor!!
lamenting, I sing!!

How I'd love to go walking
with her hand in mine
we'd build up a snowman with wife by his side
oh yes I'm quite taken
with the Bookstore Lady
but she's dating a doctor
cause that is her 'dream'

when she wakes and
sees my face and
puts her hand in mine
then we'll go out walking and talking and then
I'll take doctor's place!!!

Cause SHE'S MINE!!!!!

© Copyright 2000 Adam M.M. Stevanovic' - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2000-11-22 08:03 AM

Cute!!! And there's an added incentive to dating someone in a bookstore - you know when the next shipment of new books is coming!!  
Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
2 posted 2000-11-22 11:38 AM

Great poem and a good idea, I enjoyed it Thanks.


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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871
3 posted 2000-11-22 10:40 PM

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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico
4 posted 2000-11-24 04:30 PM

this was great.
you know i love your work!

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!

Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
5 posted 2000-11-25 09:04 AM

This is one singing place around here.  I enjoyed your rendition, hope she sees that doctors ain't everything!
Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
6 posted 2000-11-25 12:33 PM

Wonderful. Hand in hand*sigh* maybe she will come to her senses.  Thank you so much for the read

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=]

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