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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA ![]() |
It's Amazing! How many varied textures and colors of experience God uses to make up the Fabric of our lives! It's Incredible! How God can be so diverse in tht expanse of His Creativeness-- And yet be so utterly Perfect in His Oneness! It's Fantastic! How the God of all can be so attentive and condescend to each of us-- yet still have in His sights the true care and concern of all! It's Extrordinary! How that God could Love us so much Bless us so richly- And expect and receive so little in return! I am awed by such a God. I am brought to my knees in humility and praise. I owe so much to such a Magnificent One-- Can I ever begin to repay Him for all His Loving Graciousness and Superlative Goodness He's shown to me? "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb) |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
David; this is so beautiful and written in free verse too! You're breaking out into whole new areas. That's great! the first stanza was especially touching and creative.You are right that there is no way we can ever repay what He has given us. He already paid the price. All He asks in return is our willing hearts. Ellie 02 |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Your poetry certainly is blossoming in its beauty. I really like this trend, free verse is my favorite as you probally know. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear David, Poetry in prayer from your heart. How this piece blesses me, as I too, am in awe of His Love and Graciousness He extends to all who know Him. Just beautiful and from your heart.Blessings, Marcy |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Gee, David, my pastor could not have put it better. Thanks for the read! jwesley |
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Jester59701 Member
since 2000-02-29
Posts 154 |
Hi David! I honestly don't know what free verse means, but I know what writing from the heart is. You've done an excellent job of that. Thanks for sharing. Jester |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
David how well you've described His awesomeness! And how little we truly give back, and how little we deserve what He gives us. Truly humbling! Excellent job with the free verse! God bless you! Jester, free verse is merely a poem that don't rhyme. <*\\\>< God does have a sense humor. Just take a look at the platypus! |
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