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Cyndol Claycamp Junior Member
since 2000-05-17
Posts 12 |
A Wonderful world A word is written a story told. A music note put down a dance danced. A bolt today becomes a machine today. A minute passes a page written. A night goes bye leaving one sleep deprived. A seed planted a plant born. Oh wos a wonderful world. A clay wheel spun pottery made. A child born a future made. A circle spun it's just begun. A line made a picture drawn. A vow given a lasting relationship made. Oh wos a wonderful world. A minute goes by and I stay true to you, FOR THERE IS ONLY ONE GOD OF MINE. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! I love how simple the words are, but the meaning comes across crystal clear! This is some fine work. I hope you find a place here, we'd love to see more of your works. Please check your email for a special greeting. If you have any questions, feel free to email me. Just click on the little yellow envelope up there. <*\\\>< Our background and circumstances may have influenced who we are, but we are responsible for who we become. |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Welcome Cyndol, Yes, it is a "Wonderful World", just as your beautiful poem describes. Good job,marcy |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
WELCOME, Cyndol, this is a wonderful poem and I'm so glad you have joined us here. We are a great bunch who will encourage and appreciate you and your writing. Ellie 02 |
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Hi Cyndol - What a beautiful way to simply describe our wonderful world. Nice job. Bonnie |
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