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And Then There Was Sun |
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BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
As a lacy curtain of raindrops, Fell gently to the ground, The dismal clouds soon parted, And sunlight was sneaking around. As delicate sounds of thunder, Drifted further and further away, The jagged shards of lightening, Seemed hesitant to stay. Huge drops looking like crystal tears, Clung steady to the leaves, The grass below, already dry, From the balmy, whispering breeze. Violets picking themselves back up, Having been crushed by the rain, Peonies standing tall once more, Bruised, yet withstanding the pain. Cardinals bathing in puddles, Watching sparrows eat their food, Two morning doves keeping an eye, On the little ones in their brood. Squirrels, with tails now matted, Sit on the stump and preen, A bluejay is scaring a robin, While a bunny thinks he's unseen. Roses damp with lingering mist, Shimmering in their stance, Lilacs swaying gently, Doing their age-old mystical dance. An hour ago it was dreary and dark, This day was just so grim, But seeing all this beauty now, Wherever I look I see Him. His hands gently feeding the bunny, And caressing the baby dove, His light is shining all around, Filling my life with His love. [This message has been edited by BSC (edited 05-13-2000).] |
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KimW Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 268Medford, Oregon, USA |
Bonnie, This one gave me appreciative goosebumps!! Thank you for reaching me again with your words. What a vivid picture you painted here for others to see. ![]() Kim |
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Alle'cram Senior Member
since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816Texas |
Dear Bonnie, You are so gifted in many ways. You have many friend here that extend love and friendship, you are truly blessed. A beautiful poem, from a beautiful heart. marcy |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
BSC~ This is ABSOLUTELY beautiful ! I love the vivid images you painted of the nature's beauty. Capping it all off with the sunlight of His love is a perfect piece of poetry. Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Dearest Bonnie; Your pen is like a delicate paint brush that paints a picture so full of the colors of your words and all the hues of Gods love. A masterpiece! I could feel myself right there as He caressed the little doves and fed the bunnies. The essence of your lovely spirit shines through every poem you write! Love, Ellie P.S. does it have a front porch? 02 |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
The kind of poem I really enjoy reading. Thank you for picture view window of your world. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Bonnie, Your poems flow with pictureque beautiy touch the senses and warming the soul. I admire you and your God -given ability to so wonderfully portay these illustrasted messages. Thank you & God bless you, David "GOD GIVES- but man must open his hand." (German Proverb) |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I don't think I've ever been on more journeys in one year than I have been on in your poetry! Fantastic Bonnie! |
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Kavika Junior Member
since 2000-05-06
Posts 35Wyoming |
my dear this is beautiful. Your descriptions are so vivid that when reading it I felt as though I were there watchingit all myself! A beautiful poem! God bless you my dear! Grandma Amy ``Some have learnt many Tricks of sly Evasion, Instead of Truth they use Equivocation, And eke it out with mental Reservation, Which is to good Men an Abomination. '' - Benjamin Franklin |
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