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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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I'm Sorry ~~~ When the light is gently fading and you've passed out all your prayers The only thought remaining guides your way ~ When you've pulled out all the stitches and its time to get new britches The world that you've created saves the day ~ When you climb the winding stairs and the railing disappears A hand upon your shoulder comes to lay ~ When the steps come to an end tell your story to a friend Feel your worries and your troubles fade away ~ When you pass on through the gate look around to see your fate Think of the others still behind then kneel and pray ~~~ I'm not ugly! I'm just visually challenged! [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 04-10-2000).] |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Rex, I'm so glad you popped in here! I hope you do it more often  I just love this piece...It really touched me. I love how you've done this, just all of it, the way you rhymed it and formatted it! WOW! Applaud! <*\\\>< YOUR LIFE IS NOT A COINCIDENCE. IT'S A REFLECTION OF YOU! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Rex~ You are wonderful. 'When you climb the winding stairs and the railing disappears A hand upon your shoulder comes to lay' So inspiring. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very beautiful and inspiring, Rex! Denise |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Rex; thank you for this lovely poem. We do need to "kneel and pray" for each other. Very inspiring! Ellie 02 |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I see an analogy of the end of life in this poem, I don't know if that is what you intended but I see it. It is very beautiful, a gentle assention to heaven and the passing of this life. Very nice read. |
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ROSE MARY Member
since 2000-04-09
Posts 82scranton,pa. u.s.a |
whimsical with good true meaning thanks for the share i was uplifted |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Rex, This is a beautifully inspiring piece here-but I don't get the connection of the the poem with the title (I must be a little dense)--could you explain it for me? Thank you, David |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
WhtDove ... your reply is so inspiring ... how could I refuse ... thankyou Marge ... you too are wonderful ... you seem to be able to put your pen up to any task ... successfully Denise ... thankyou ... you always read and reply with beauty ... you are a sweetheart ellie LeJeune ... you've certainly got that right ... coming from an Irish catholic background ... I think there's room to give and receive a lot of prayer Septsong ...yes you are right about the poem it is about life at its' metamorphose to Gods'country ROSE MARY ... thankyou for reading and taking the time to tell me you enjoyed it deleeme ... I'm Sorry is what I would say to the gate keeper and god at the first opportunity ... I'm sorry for all that I am ... and all that I wanted to be but couldn't find the time. Our paths are paved with good intentions |
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