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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Harvest that the angels reap, Forever in thy kingdom keep, Fruited fields of hallowed grace, Unto thy glory we embrace, Three as one, praise heaven's Host, Father, Son, and Holy Ghost, Splendor of thy Trinity, Blessed peace eternally. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
AMEN! So beautiful, Mike! You write good long ones and good short ones! This one is truly inspiring! Sounds so lovely, I can't wait! Dancing with the angels we will be!  __________________________________________ (Mike, I'd email you if I could, but I can't so since you are THE sonnet man, could you take a look at the ones I did and tell me what you think?! They are in open 4 The first is 'At Last I Call You Friend' and the next one is 'The Poet's Pen' probably a couple pages back!) Thanks (I don't mean to be a pest if I am) ------------------ Denise [This message has been edited by dsnyder (edited 11-19-1999).] |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Truly a beauty here! Thank you for sharing this beautiful poem with us! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautiful, Mike, this sings to me. Glad you stopped by spiritual, hope you will share more soon. Michael |
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Kenneth Ray Taylor Member
since 1999-11-11
Posts 139Duluth, Minnesota, USA |
A lovely song of a poem. Simple, yet echoing with a solemnity so lacking nowadays. In the fourth line I'd change the word "Unto" to "To," so as not to interupt the meter. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Impacted much with few words! Very well done, and thank you for sharing this! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
So beautiful Mike! Beautiful....beautiful Jenny Lee |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Yes, very beautiful Mike....... ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Few words...speaks volumes! |
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