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Raul Noriega Junior Member
since 2000-02-12
Posts 11 |
Sights of red and smoke-filled air shade the walls on which I stare A friend of stars and student of a child's pure and honest love Eyes that cry when refusing to see the many beasts inside of me My little saviors to whom I reach and beg on knee for me to teach Oh, the many faces of nightmares old in tampered vaults my secrets hold And mirrors on walls of tarnished halls with sticky stains hearing the small forgotten calls of my remains My angels |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
God can clear all that out! WELCOME! He can take the past if we let go, and guide our future if we but give it. <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
Raul, This one tugs at the heart strings, as a little one would tug on a pantleg and looking up and seeing perfection, and that for which we desparately sigh. Ah those little angels! Good poem! David "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Raul; Beautifully written poem. Little ones are the hope of the world and a child shall lead us. Welcome, Raul, this is a heavenly forum and I'm looking forward to more of your poetry. 02 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
hi again..I just commented on this poem over at DP, but I'll say welcome to Spiritual Journeys as well!!! smile... take care, janet marie In the time we've known That we each are a part of one another We've lost as much as we have won... And as our lives have grown We have found that it only brings us pain To hang on to the things that we have done... ***Still I love the times you've come*** Jackson Browne |
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mirjam Member
since 1999-11-24
Posts 246Auckland, New Zealand |
Welcome Raul! He sure can clear all that out, and more! I really like your writing style, and was especially delighted by your last stanza! Thanks for sharing, i'm definitely looking forward to reading more of your work! |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Welcome and thank you. Great writing. It's always so clear to me why Jesus said,"And a child shall lead them" and unless we have childlike faith. Children may have less education than adults, but they always seem to be more genuine, and freer. |
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