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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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Tell me your name, perpetual presence. Could you spark the fire of a spiritual peasant? Come and sit, and have a cup. Come out from within, filling me up. Tell me your name, comforting shadow... whisper to me so I'll know that I know... |
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thumper4him Junior Member
since 2000-02-06
Posts 27Newport Beach Ca |
it is so important for us to listen and watch for the lord is around us all the time waiting. This is another one of those poems in which there is margin of opinion. I atleast think it is reminding us of how softly god whispers you can't make footprints in the sand of times that you are sitting down |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Lovely. I can feel His gentle love in your words. 02 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
this poem has a lovely comforting message... I love the whispers and the shadows,very good poem. take care, janet marie |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Thumper--a whisper is always preferable to a yell... ellie----thank you for understanding. Janet----I'm so glad you got it--because I truly wanted to convey the comfort of my morning meditations/prayers. I feel like you felt it too. Thanks. |
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kari Member
since 1999-10-03
Posts 104Hyde Park, Ut, USA |
Your poem gives a sweet feeling when you read it. Very well done. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Name? I AM that I AM. "Be still and know that I am God" <*\\\>< When you can't make up your mind Which way is right for you, Stop and softly ask yourself, What Would Jesus Do? |
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dovesongs Member
since 2000-01-29
Posts 102Michigan |
This makes me think of "Be still and Know I AM God." Good reminder to sit quietly and meditate with him. |
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deleeme Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766NEW ENGLAND, USA |
I like the sense of personal identity & seeking--the wanting to know the Divine one better-who is already so close-He has to "come out from within." A warm & wonderful poem, is what I see here. Thank you,serenity- it seems quite true to your screen name. David "Our Creativity points to a Higher Creator--we couldn't have just happened, and for what ability we may possess--to God be the glory." -dlw- |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
As a practitioner of an alternative religion, I sometimes feel that my thoughts on this theme may not jibe with the mainstream...I hope and I pray that I may continue to share my ideas, and I fully appreciate the positive, open-minded feedback. All paths lead to God. |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Lovely writing. I think everyone here believes there is only one God, and we all believe in Him. A different denomination doesn't change Him. One pastor was asked how many were in his church. He said, "More than Noah had in his." |
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OWPEMT Member
since 2000-02-14
Posts 63389 Noble Road West, Shiloh, Ohio 44878 USA |
So many times we wonder what it is the Lord wants us to do, and if we would just take a few minutes to stop, look, and listen, we might her what it was he was trying to say all along, and your Poem so soft and sweet tells of just that, it was great Sandy OWPEMT |
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