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Lost Dreamer
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since 1999-06-20
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 1999-11-15 08:35 AM


The Child

There he was
as innocent
as a child
can be
handing a man
a package
to unwrap.
Not uttering
a word
leaving it
to the man's
own mind
to determine
the child's need.
Never seeing
this child before
and not even knowing
where he came from
the man offers
to unwrap the package
for the child.

The child
walks away
smile glued
upon his face
even though
it seemed to be
a permanent fixture
for this child to have.
Not a fear
in the world
did this
child exhibit
just a friendly
demeanor to everyone
he saw.

From this
child evoked
another response
this from
a women
who saw
this child
as a special
little person
that she would
love to embrace.
"I want to take him home!"
was her response.

How often is it
that we look
at a stranger
and see only
the wonderful
reflection
that he or she
is portraying?

How often
would we try
to determine
the need
of an adult
if they were
to stand
before us
with a package
and not speak a word?

Is this
only possible
with the innocence
of a child
before our eyes?

Cynical as it
may sound
the scenario
is all to
often reality.
For we
expect adults
to be
self sufficient,
and if
they are not,
we feel
they should
be put away
somewhere
or at the least
have someone
assisting them.

We as
competent adults
need to reach out
to more strangers
in our daily lives
excusing fear
as our reason
to shy away.
The end result
of our reaching out
to others
is that
we become stronger
in our faith
by doing
what should
come naturally
from being
God's children.

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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
1 posted 1999-11-15 08:51 AM


I will add a big AMEN to that. Good poem, L.D.

Michael

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 1999-11-15 12:04 PM


Right ON! Amen from me too! For it is full of truth! Excellent point!
Echo Rhayne
Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA
3 posted 1999-11-15 06:46 PM


I'll add an Amen as well. Sometimes I wonder if children should have been born as adults and adults be known as kids cause sometimes just the natural wisdom of a child is more often right then it isnt. Their meekness, humble responses to a warm loving kiss on the cheek allows for a true relationship that sometimes adults may continue to seek for the rest of their lives. They have an easier acceptance of one another without hiding their faces. They may argue with some close friends or even argue with those they do not know but how soon does a child forgive and forget. We could learn a lot from a child. I have watched many children unconsciously go up to a starnger and start spreading the word of God, while adults are too embarrased or just dont want to. We do need to reach out to more strangers, and I think we can learn a valuable lesson from children as well as from this poem! Good job, thank you for sharing!


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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-11-15 10:20 PM


I ditto the Amen! Very wonderful,LD!

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Denise


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