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Amaranthine
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since 2002-10-06
Posts 61
ON Canada

0 posted 2002-10-12 03:24 AM



i was asleep
i was alone

Now i Am
and still-
am asleep
and am alone
Despite the claims
of those opposed
to my state of mind
and soul

no christ came
no buddha showed
the doorway to this new abode
you see you can't
unless you find
the perfect door
into my mind

and still beyond
the brains' weak binds
my spirit flashes
beyond my kind

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1 posted 2002-10-12 03:56 PM




(sigh) Yes, and sometimes it indeed takes a lot to open that door and believe in fully but as your spirit shines so will the strength and purity of your soul! (big hugggsssss) This is wonderfully said, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brian, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Succubus
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since 2002-09-30
Posts 82
Canada, Ontario
2 posted 2002-10-15 06:09 PM


Another amazing piece my sweet.
I felt as if I were reading my own soul as I read this poem...
Beautifully done,
Kisses
Succubus

Some say it's better to have 10% of something than a 100% of nothing...
...But I'll only settle for a 100 thank you...

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