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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois

0 posted 2000-10-02 12:15 PM


The path we walk is narrow
It's not always shining bright
Somehow o're the horizon
We again shall see your Light

The road sometimes seems lonely
And we think we're all alone
But when deep puddles appear
You become our stepping stone

You walk with us in darkness
Lead us back into the Light
Gently hold our shaking hand
Keep us safe all through the night

When we stray from narrow path
And in our times of trial
It's comforting to know that
You're beside us all the while

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ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
1 posted 2000-10-02 05:49 PM


Dear Becky; I feel so comforted by these words. Beautifully written too! Love, Ellie
sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
2 posted 2000-10-02 06:00 PM


A beautiful piece revealing our trials and His constant unconditional love for us. It flows so nicely.
deleeme
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
3 posted 2000-10-02 06:59 PM


Dear Becky,
  Your poem here expresses lovely truths of Gracious provisions for our journey, and the need to be seeking that help so lovely extended to us!  Well done,   David


WOW- another day of life-and here among friends!
Ain't God Grand!



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Florida's Foreverly Shores
4 posted 2000-10-02 07:33 PM


WhiteDove~
Such a lovely expression of faith.
Very inspirational and comforting.
~*Marge*~


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WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
5 posted 2000-10-03 12:29 PM


Thank you all!
CitiZen-One
Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 84
New Mexico
6 posted 2000-10-03 12:33 PM


A precious poem that lifts me up. Thank you christ for reaching out to me and pulling me from the abyss.
BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
7 posted 2000-10-03 08:34 PM


Jesus is the light on that narrow path we walk. An encouraging word when we think we walk alone.
Very nice write.
Deb

Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
8 posted 2000-10-04 01:19 PM


It is inspirational to know that the Light is always with us even in darkness giving us direction through life... Such comforting thoughts you have blessed us with.  God Bless You, Bob <><
Horizon
Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 51

9 posted 2000-10-05 09:16 PM


This was beautifully put, sometimes we may stray and go down the wrong path, but He always seems to be there guiding us home. Thank you for writing this, it brings me hope.  

[This message has been edited by Horizon (edited 10-05-2000).]

BSC
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since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919
New York, USA
10 posted 2000-10-06 02:34 PM


Becky, Beautiful!!!  What a blessing it is to know that He is never far from us.  Wonderful poem, wonderful message.  Bonnie
jlocke
Member
since 2000-09-10
Posts 169
CC,TX
11 posted 2000-10-07 03:27 AM


Such sweet truths.  You know I can relate, as do many of us.  I want you to know that your words so deeply touch me.  Keep them coming, please.


and your young men shall see visions,
and your old men shall dream dreams (Acts 2:17)

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
12 posted 2000-10-07 01:16 PM


CitiZen-One I'm really happy if this has touched you. It is a great feeling when He pulls out of the muck.  God bless you!

Thank you Deb for your kind words.


Bless you back Bob!   Thanks!

Horizon so right! I'm glad it gave you hope.


Bonnie that is a blessing! Thanks!!

jlocke I'm glad they touch you so. I hope they can keep coming. Not been writing a whole lot lately. Thank you!

That has been my goal, if I can reach out and touch one with the Spirit of God, or to make a difference, then I'm happy.  

Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
13 posted 2003-01-01 12:05 PM


Especially good tonight...a lonely new year is not something I want to experience. I miss you Becky!
aries_luv_ppl
Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448
Universal Mind
14 posted 2003-01-02 03:36 PM


Good write! So comforting...

Eliza Simmons
~Sometimes when I look back at what I wrote, I don't recognize the 'Me' in the past anymore.

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