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Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
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0 posted 2002-10-03 03:23 AM



God my Lord and Savior,
Take pity upon me.
Forgive please my behavior.
I repent sincerely.

I will no more offend you
With sinful ways I lived.
I speak to you
what is now true.
I ask you to forgive.

No more will I be stealing
Or getting into strife.
No more will I be feeling
That I am not alive.

Because of your forgiveness
I will be finally free
With the hopes of being sinless.
Oh Lord please pity me!


[This message has been edited by Radrook (10-03-2002 03:26 AM).]

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1 posted 2002-10-03 11:37 PM




(sigh) Oh Radrook, this is so wonderfully expressed, sweet friend, He will always teach forgiveness as He loves you so much and He is even far more blessed knowing how you have understood your faults and the heart to submit is a virtue! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Radrook, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-10-04 05:08 AM


Noah is correct in that once you realize your own misgivings that is the beginning of healing and forgiveness.  Your prayer was so nicely done and I am sure it will be answered.  God Bless.

Howdy Neighbour
     
Sharon  

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
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California
3 posted 2002-10-05 12:51 PM


A beautiful and I felt sincere poem of turning away from the past and turning to God for the future.  God bless you my friend and continue to fill your life with His joyful presence and His love.

-Bob

2dalimit
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4 posted 2002-10-06 09:41 AM


God will forgive you by simply asking sincerely.
Thanks for reminding me, as well.

Melton

Radrook
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since 2002-08-09
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5 posted 2002-10-07 01:47 AM


Thanks for the encouraging words.
Glad you enjoyed the poem.
God bless you all!

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
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Illinois
6 posted 2003-06-27 12:29 PM


Sorry I missed this the first time around.
I love it! Though we won't be sinless until the eternity, we all fall short, but thank GOD for HIS forgivness!  It's great to know
all we have to do is sincerely ask and He is willing to forgive. Not only forgive, but wipe the slate clean for us until we once again fall short.

Very nice writing!

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Life may have influenced who we R, but we're responsible for what we become.
I don't question YOUR existance- GOD

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