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Gold and Silver Strands |
Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Gold and Silver Strands My life is like a patterned quilt I've made with loving hands. The islands of events are tied With gold and silver strands. The gold is for the happy times. The silver for the sad And there's an ample share of each. A mix of good and bad. The background has a rosy hue, For optimism felt, Through all the vagaries of life, No matter what was dealt. The batting, is my inner faith, That God will light my way And give me time to stitch and sew, To add more every day! Betty Lou Hebert [This message has been edited by Trillium (09-17-2002 06:56 PM).] |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Trillium, this is a lovely poem, what a wonderful way to put it. super! [This message has been edited by Miah (09-17-2002 07:46 PM).] |
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soaring eagle Junior Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 24 |
so very lovely betty reminds me much of my favourite song silver threads and golden needles muchas gracias |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Betty, there is so much comfort in this piece. What a wonderful way to express your life. You are truly a gifted writer. Hugs and loves, Marti |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
What a lovely quilt you have penned. Joyce |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Yay! Oh Betty, yes, keep weaving away and may the gold in your quilt outshine the silver with angel hugs and friendship light! (kiss on cheek) This is a beautiful tapestry of words, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Miah: Thank you for your nice comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Soaring Eagle: I'm glad you liked this and thanks for your kind comments. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Marti: What a nice compliment and thank you for reading and commenting. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Thanks Joyce! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: Thanks and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Betty Lou Hebert |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh my Betty Lou ~ What a beautiful weave you have done here, I do believe it is one of the most lovely reminders I've ever read. I'd like to keep it on my fridge so I can read it everyday and be thankful for all of the "Gold and Silver Strands" ... May I? Bonnie |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Bonnie: What a wonderful compliment. Thanks. I would be delighted to think it is on your refrigerator. Betty Lou Hebert |
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kindredlibra New Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 3WA USA |
I really liked this poem, especially using the batting as a metaphor for your faith. Very original! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
kindredlibra: Thank you for your kind comments. Also, welcome to the site. I see you are a new member. Enjoy yourself here! |
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Tommysgirl03 Junior Member
since 2002-09-21
Posts 35 |
Wow! How awesome this is! What a great write such feeling and honesty. I really enjoyed reading this. A new way to look at life. Angelia |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Betty; Your magical gift of poetry and the analogy you use here, weave a glorious picture of faith and hope and much wisdom! Hugs, Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Betty, this is a wonderful piece! Its flow is impeccable with not a forced rhyme in the lot of it. It's beautiful, too! A heartbeat of rhythm in tune with the Spirit. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Angelia: Thank you for commenting. I appreciate your nice comments and glad the poem pleased you. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
ellie: Thanks for commenting. I always appreciate your response. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
VAS: What lovely comments. Thank you. I always say "God guides my pen" so I need to give credit where it is due! Betty Lou Hebert |
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