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Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

0 posted 2002-08-20 02:05 AM

God, where are you?
Right here.
Why does it hurt?
To make you stronger.
Will it last forever?
No.
Do you love me?
More than anything else.
Why?
Because you’re my daughter.
But why?
Because I created you.
Are you really here?
Right beside you.
And you’ll never leave me, right?
Never. I made that promise, and I will keep it.
When will it stop hurting?
When it’s time.
Will I find true love?
You know you will.
Is it okay to cry?
I catch every tear that falls from your eyes.
How do I say thank you?
By loving me and drawing close to me.
I love you...
I love you too, my child.

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

1 posted 2002-08-20 02:21 AM

Very splendidly done.

Very real, personal... meek, childlike. Hungry, yearning, yet scared, scared to trust, scared to not trust. Faith. Even in the hard times.

Sincerely,
Titus

"I'll prepare myself, and one day my time will come."
-Abraham Lincoln

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

2 posted 2002-08-20 03:01 AM

Well those answers were all that I expected them to be - nicely done!

The most valuable thing you own is a smile, wear it, and share it.
Sharon

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-08-20 03:04 AM

(smiles) Oh Rhonda, this is sooooooo beautiful, I love it, yes, He loves you and will never make promises He can't keep as joy is bound to fill your heart! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Rhonda, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

4 posted 2002-08-20 05:24 AM

Skyfire... A wonderful conversation between you and God. I enjoyed listening in very much
Please never stop talking to God, his phone line is never busy, dial it anytime...Paul

Joyce Johnson

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since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

5 posted 2002-08-20 11:20 AM

You describe a very tender and personal moment with God. He is always there for you. Joyce

miriam
Member

since 1999-08-26

Posts 323
glendale,ca.

6 posted 2002-08-21 01:31 PM

Haven't we all done that, we run to the Lord with our broken hearts. This is a beautiful poem, and yes the Lord is there with you always. He's in every breath you take and in every morning.

miriam coronado

GOlDsparklESS
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 428
central nj

7 posted 2002-08-21 08:01 PM

awww... sweet.

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2002-08-22 04:55 PM

Skyfire: Isn't it wonderful when we ask questions and get loving answers?

Betty Lou Hebert

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

9 posted 2002-08-23 01:10 AM

Thank you all of you!

I don't really have anything constructive or explanitory to say to this, other than I wrote this while I was in a moment of missing my ex. I don't know why I didn't write it before now, because I've already gone back to this one a few times, and it's helped me out. Thank you for all your warm replies

tracie66
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since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

10 posted 2002-08-24 02:43 AM

WOW!!!
This is so incredibly beautiful and inspiring, well done on a most delightful and touching poem.

~hugs~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

11 posted 2002-08-24 05:45 AM

wow sis i'm so proud of you!! here look this psalm up 91:11 keep it close to your heart and remeber sis i am always here for you.

you either like me for who i am or you don't like me at all

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

12 posted 2002-08-24 07:13 PM

Some days it feels like God is in the Bahamas enjoying a much needed vacation.

However, thankfully, He is right beside us 24/7 and loves us.

Nice poem, I enjoyed it very much.

Hugs, Marti

"Even if life is full of thorns,
I still embrace it, for I know
that in between those thorns,
there is a rose worth all the pain."

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

13 posted 2004-02-24 10:23 PM

Glad I came across this one as I just read it to my daughter who badly needed to hear this. I will print this one out and hang it upon my fridg. God bless

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Life may have influenced who we R, but we're responsible for what we become.
I don't question YOUR existance- GOD

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