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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2002-08-17 01:49 PM



Compared to God
(A simple Analogy)

Beneath this stern facade
There's still a boy I swear
Who when compared to God
Wears Snoopy underwear
And like a fearful child
Who wakes up from his fright
Might find his shorts defiled
In the middle of the night
A boy still lives inside
Who's trembling wet and scared
And needs a Loving Father
When to God I am compared.


-Lighthouse Bob


© Copyright 2002 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-08-17 01:54 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Robert, this both made me smile and broke my heart at the same time because what made me smile is that you are a wonderful loving person and a wonderful father that indeed compares to God with him, as it mad eme cry because I used to be that little boy who was scared and just wanted a shoulder to cry over and be loved! (wipes tears) This is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You, you are a wonderful daddy and friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Joyce Johnson
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2 posted 2002-08-18 10:46 AM


I don't think any of us would rate very high compared to Him.  Joyce
Annette Kimmel
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since 2002-08-03
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3 posted 2002-08-18 12:36 PM


                        
Hi Robert:-)
What a touching poem you have here! God bless you and thanks for sharing it with us.
Annette

Dulcinea
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4 posted 2002-08-19 10:32 PM


Cool! I couldn't help but feel remorse for the poor little boy, but also motherly chuckle at the snoopy underwear! (sorry) Very well done Bob! God Bless you!
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