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The Napkin Writer Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 70 |
Child of My Soul I found the child, lying next to the stone Where Angles sat whispering Of promises known I closed in, so closely The Danger to see Crushed, to the stone In images of me The child that I lost Who leaped in his dream Upon Gods' Mountain He dreamed, in his sleep While clinging to hope The devil did speak And a frighten, little child In fearful, did leap And the child of my soul Forever, did sleep Embraced by Gods' Stone Where Angels did weep I sit at his feet And so, I do weep..... For this child, saved my Soul On that day When he leaped The Napkin Writer ©, June 12th, 2002 |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
Wow!! this is BEAUTIFUL!! miriam coronado |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) This is soooooo heartwrenchingly beautiful, sweet friend, God Bless You and that dearest child, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent! Beautifully penned. ~Hugs, Nancy~ |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
WOW! What an amazing piece of writing. I read it and re-read it several times and the ending continued to surprise me. '....And so, I do weep..... For this child, saved my Soul On that day When he leaped.....' Very, very impressive. Hugs, Marti |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
this is lovely. Joyce |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Superb feel and message to this and I love your poet's pseudonym! Very clever, yet powerfully humble. Is that an oxymoron? That name says to me: This person writes to release the tension from the flow of words seeking escape, whatever is handy, no matter, the words must come out. Exciting! Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
If I haven't yet done so, let me Welcome you to Passions and to Spiritual Journeys... Unless we become as a little child, we cannot enter into the Kingdom. I rejoice here because the child of your soul was released to rest now in the loving arms of Jehovah God. Good job. -Bob |
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The Napkin Writer Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 70 |
Thank you everyone for your kindness. God Bless |
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Annette Kimmel Junior Member
since 2002-08-03
Posts 31 |
 This is a beautiful and very inspiring poem. Thanks for sharing it with usAnnette :-) |
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