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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-07-22 11:47 PM


Where...Am I?

Vivian So aka. Eliza Simmons
(c) Jul 22, 2002

One day...
When I was listening... to music...
I... realized
How much time I had been wasted
In singing... without a heart.
I... was focussed on...
The sound of my vocal...
Putting myself... in the middle,
Missing the key... of praising-
To make you my Lord.
I try... to remember
The very meaning of being here... on stage.
I... hope
Our blessing... would be a reminder of Him.
Where am I?
Who is Lord?
I ask that question... everyday.
Where...Am I?
Am I a servant to Him?
Did I serve others... like Jesus did?
Did I... cherish my... family?
Lord I pray... this may be my daily prayer.

Eliza Simmons
~He is amazing regardless how we feel.
~He is amazing because He cares us regardless our beliefs.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
CrAzY8
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1 posted 2002-07-22 11:54 PM


It is very wonderfully written, you seem to have been honest when you wrote this. I think we all should pray along those lines. agian Nicely written


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2 posted 2002-07-23 01:08 AM


This is completely sincere and lovely.  Joyce
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3 posted 2002-07-23 01:45 PM


Eliza:  What an appealing poem!  I guess all of us ask ourselves these questions periodically. It's good to keep track of where we are going and what our relationship with God is.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-07-23 10:21 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Eliza, this is soooooo honestly heartfelt, sweet friend, yes, I believe prayer can always influence the heart and soul of one, this is beautiful, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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