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aries_luv_ppl
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since 2001-09-20
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0 posted 2002-07-09 07:57 PM


Roses are perfume
That once touch the air.
Mild and brief
Seem to be their characters.
Brief and touching,
But memories may not be lasting.

Flowers wave at me;
Bees pass me by-
Nothing means for tomorrow.
If I'm to cherish the flowers,
The actions belong today.

And spring will come again,
And go again in slience,
Like different seeds
Come across with wind.
Then, they're gone...
They're gone.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2002-07-10 02:36 AM


aries_luv_ppl,

I like your poem. Though it's kind of melancholy, your poem still offers much hope. Reminds me that to everything there is a season... (turn, turn, turn, turn...) Spring has come and gone. But as your poem states, Spring will return again and so will some new seeds, fresh rose buds, and hopefully some very fond memories...  GOD bless you and thanks again for sharing.

-Bob

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2 posted 2002-07-10 11:14 PM


Yes but the promis is there that they will come again as it with us nd the roses are here to show us.  Joyce
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3 posted 2002-07-11 02:53 AM




(sigh) Oh Eliza, this is beautifully sad, sweet friend, yes there will always be a spring to follow yesterdays spring and the robins will sing to your hearts content! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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