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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA 
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Young David A shepherd boy named David went To take some food his father sent To brothers who were waging war With Philistines, who daily swore That they would vanquish every man. They had a very frightening plan. A giant was among their throng, Called Goliath and he was strong! Clad in a cap made out of brass, The ground shook when he made a pass. His armour weighed more than some men. We will not see his like again! David watched him boast and shout. Within his mind there was no doubt That he could cause the giant's fall And so he went to see King Saul. For David bore king's armour well And soothed him from the evil spell That sometimes came upon the king. Then he would ask that David sing. So knowing Saul with favor viewed His servant and in a pleasant mood, Young David asked if he might go And rid Saul of this monstrous foe. He told of tending flocks of sheep That he must always strive to keep In safety from the ones who prey. Bear and lion he kept away. So Saul approved and David came And called upon the Lord's great name To help him in this fateful fight, To overcome Goliath's might. A sling he carried and he threw A river stone that traveled true And lodged deep in the man's forehead. Goliath crashed to earth, quite dead! King Saul rewarded David then And he did not go home again, But dwelt with Saul, a hero's due And all the people loved him too! Betty Lou Hebert 1 Samuel chapter 16, vs 17 thru 23 and chapter 17 [This message has been edited by Trillium (05-04-2002 11:05 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, I LOVE IT, I LOVE IT, THIS IS EXCELLENT! (smiles) I have read the literary works of DFavid and Goliath's tale, sweet friend, this is a wonderful poetic re-enactment of this timeless classic! (big hugggssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, your words are always such a pleasure to read, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Betty, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a beautiful version of the David and Goliath story. Well done Betty. Joyce |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Noah: I always enjoy your comments so much and appreciate them. I have always loved the story of David and Goliath and I finally got around to writing about it. Of course there is so much more to David's life and I will probably write more about him. Thanks Noah. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Joyce: Thanks. I always look for your comments. It was enjoyable to write this. Betty Lou Hebert |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
You have penned one of the most loved classic stories ever told. The rhythm holds the interest well. Anyone, especially children, would pay attention while it is being recited. Thank you very much. Melton |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Melton: Thank you for your kind remarks. I had been explaining this story to my youngest son and the poem started coming to me, so, as you say, children would understand it. Betty Lou Hebert |
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