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0 posted 2002-03-03 12:52 PM




Life’s struggle

It’s so hard to stay tall
When everything around you just wants to fall
I see the world around me crumble
I try to walk but I feel myself tumble

There are so many problems all around
There are so many aeroplanes to ground
So many bombs to fall
So many relatives to call
And all I think
Is my life’s on the brink?

I relate my life
To the trouble and strife
I feel so bad
Because everyone’s so sad
And all I can do
Is think of myself too
And I get mad
Because things are so bad
And there’s NOTHING I can do.

Life is about change,sometimes its painful,sometimes its beautiful,sometimes its both.

© Copyright 2002 Clare Griffiths - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-03-03 01:31 PM




(BIG HUGGGGSSSSSSS) Oh Clare, we all know just how you feel, there is without a doubt so much sorrow and pain in this world but I also know that hope exists in Him and if we can all just reach up to Him, we will carry on and grow rich in love and if we can all unite, we can bring harmony and love to all the world! (kiss on cheek) I pray for all of this with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Clare, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2002-03-03 03:22 PM


when the world overwhelms...
i have ever found solace in prayer.

    

    ...was once upon, bleeding
        and Tramp Poet for awhile.
         Now; I'm just little ole me
          wearing nothin but a smile

Justbleu
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3 posted 2002-05-02 02:12 AM


I often feel this way....but about the only thing that helps is knowing that God is always there!!!!  I liked your poem!!!!

Thanks!!!!

Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


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4 posted 2002-05-04 02:24 PM


Yes it is a sad world but there can be a better one
if each of us does our little share
and turns to the loving God in prayer.

Love, Joyce

Gemini
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5 posted 2002-05-06 07:16 PM


I'm not sure who to give credit to here but I had heard that the soul would have no rainbow had the eyes no tears.  Your poem was very hearfelt and hugs to you, you will be in my prayers.
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