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2dalimit
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0 posted 2002-04-05 08:45 AM


(Inspired by Johnny Hart, author of the comic strip, B.C.)

Every man has sinned
buying a ticket to Hell…
God’s grace has saved us
Jesus descended to Earth
Canceling reservations




© Copyright 2002 Melton Culberth - All Rights Reserved
BloomingRose
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1 posted 2002-04-05 11:40 AM


Very good! I am thankful he was willing to pay the price.

Deb

Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2002-04-05 01:09 PM


Melton,

  A good sense of humor is always appreciated.  (Smiles.) So glad Jesus made a sudden change in our destination.  -Bob

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3 posted 2002-04-05 08:31 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, I too love the sense of humor in your words, sweet friend, yet this also shines with wisdom that now our paths are laid before us and thanks to Him we have guidance along the way! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friedn, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

2dalimit
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4 posted 2002-04-05 09:17 PM


Deb, Thanks. I am very thankful, too.

Bob, Thanks. I am comfortable with my writing and believe it's a fun challenge to experiment with poetic forms.

Noah, Your kind words are always welcome.

SEA
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5 posted 2002-04-06 08:53 AM


oh I like that comic strip, and I really enjoyed this tanka!!
2dalimit
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6 posted 2002-04-06 08:58 AM


Thank you, Sea. Your comment means a lot.

Melton

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