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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Just Ask HE tapped upon my heart’s door… Let me help you end your war Stop along life’s busy street… sit and rest your weary feet Tell me what is on your mind… unload your grief anytime Let me help you on your way… let me help you learn to pray I am here to listen now… just close your eyes, kneel, or bow Leave your troubles in my hands… I’ll forgive you of your sins Come to me with open heart… yes, I need a fresh new start I am tired and need to halt… all my grief is my own fault I know now you paid the price… thank you Lord, your plan’s precise. “Holy Father up above… fill my heart with all your love Forgive me of all my sins… I place my life in your hands” I humbly bow at your feet… Satan now has met defeat |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Very nice. A good reminder that we need to stop and ask. Joyce |
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Tramp Poet Senior Member
since 2000-01-06
Posts 754Could Be Anywhere... |
hey Melton, liked the way you set this up... the counter-play used to illustrate the great Truths was well done...with good impact thanks Daniel ... was once upon, bleeding |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  BRAVO!!! Yes, yes, may we always embrace Him when we are weak and in need of His love to comfort our tears and grief and always ask, for He loves us all so much and His love will never fail us as long as we ask for it! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melton, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
That's all we need do. Just ask. Thanks for sharing. ((2dalimit)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
2dalimit, I love your response to Jesus' invitation.... -Bob |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
Beautiful! So well done and poetically unique. Your answer to His call of Love magnificent! A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
2dalimit: An impressive poem! Good job. I wonder why it's so hard to "just ask" at times? [This message has been edited by Trillium (03-24-2002 05:57 PM).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful sentiments Melton, and excellent meter and rhyme ... very much enjoyed this tender prayer, thank you. Best wishes, /Kit |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Very sweetly written. Enjoyed both the Savior's statements and your reply to Him. Neat job. Cheryl |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
great poem, it's amazing that all we need do is ask. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Joyce, Yes we do need reminding every so often. Thanks Daniel, Thank you for your comment on the setup- He talks, you listen. Noah, You understand well. Thanks Newell, Thank you, Sir, for understanding, as well. Bob, His invitation is simple and all we have to do is respond. Thanks ellie, I’m glad you liked it. He is always close. Betty, He offers the plan and all you have to do is ask. Kit, I’m honored that you enjoyed it. Thanks a lot for reading. Cheryl , Thanks. You can hear his calling, if you stop to listen. Rose, Thank you for commenting. Thank you all... Melton |
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