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laconic
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since 2002-02-17

Posts 64
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2002-02-23 08:33 AM

The dark eternal hanging heavily over my head
dreaming of riches and a sinful life led
it all seems so right
till you realise its wrong
then the curtain of smoke is lifted
all deceptions are gone
like a puff of smoke you see the old self dying
but inside your not mourning no longer crying
the body is dead but the mind lives on
through Jesus Christ all retain strong
though i'm no angel i'm not forsaken
My God is merciful no never hating
always forgiving even when i'm wrong
my God is here with me never gone
in all the days of my life i felt alone
but now i know that i've found home
my soul is saved
because i had faith
in the one and only God of heaven above
and in his never ending love
-Amen

my inspiration has drained like perspiration ..again i'm empty like hemp i been smoked dry...*sigh*

[This message has been edited by laconic (02-23-2002 08:34 AM).]

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

1 posted 2002-02-23 11:30 AM

Hi luke...I enjoyed this. I too enjoy a renewal of spirit! Lovely thought in this.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2002-02-23 11:34 AM

this is wonderful

Silver Streak
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since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

3 posted 2002-02-23 01:08 PM

my soul is saved
because i had faith
in the one and only God of heaven above
and in his never ending love
-Amen

How true! A wonderful prayer.

-newell

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Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2002-02-23 06:41 PM

"my soul is saved
because i had faith
in the one and only God of heaven above
and in his never ending love
-Amen"

YAY!!! Ooohhhhh...this is such a wonderful declaration of enlightenment, I lolve it!!! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is excellent! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Luke, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

gracianna
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 165
A 14 year hell

5 posted 2002-02-23 06:52 PM

I like this one. My favorite line was

"The dark eternal hanging heavily over my head"

I like the illiteration.

I give a whole new meaning to the word 'sad.'

laconic
Member

since 2002-02-17

Posts 64
Melbourne, Australia

6 posted 2002-02-23 07:05 PM

thanks ya'all

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