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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA 
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As I drift through eternity "You alone are the Lord. You made the heavens, even the highest heavens, and all their starry host, the earth and all that is on it, the seas and all that is in them. You give life to everything, and the multitudes of heaven worship you." NIV Nehemiah 9:6 As I drift through eternity All pure life do I fully see Connected to my God and me As I drift through eternity. All time and space a point I see Connecting ev'ry frequency In God's Creation little me In joyful praise for all I see. As I drift through eternity All pure life do I fully see Connected to my God and me As I drift through eternity. I fly up high God's sky to see Another pretty frequency Beyond all stars and galaxies Though here I am, a spirit, be. As I drift through eternity All pure life do I fully see Connected to my God and me As I drift through eternity. And you are in my spirit, free As you, too, fly along with me In God we're all just one, you see A point in God's big loving sea. As I drift through eternity All pure life do I fully see Connected to my God and me As I drift through eternity. As long as we all Love and please Our God will keep us in warm from freeze Together in a point of ease We live and love upon God's seas. As I drift through eternity All pure life do I fully see Connected to my God and me As I drift through eternit. As I drift through eternity. Copyright: Newell Elsworth Usher Silver Streak of Silver Spring, Florida February 22, 2002 Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
hello newell...I was wondering if this was a structured form, as I noticed the repetition of end words in lines 1 & 4 in most, but not all of your quatrains? Interesting format, nevertheless! |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Hi Karen, Gee, I really didn't try for any particular structure. As I was going to fill up with gas, yesterday after dinner, I just started singing the chorus. Over and over. And so when I got home I quickly penned the words and made up verses. So I guess it should be called a song instead of a poem. Looking back at it, it does have an interesting structure in quatrains with fixed meter and four line rhyme, but I didn't plan it that way. Thank you for your interesting question. Now I am curious.  ((Karen)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com Copyright: 2002 Newell Elsworth Usher [This message has been edited by Silver Streak (02-23-2002 11:54 AM).] |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Silver Streak...This poem is as gentle as a warm, summer breeeze drifting across oceanic waters. Loved the eternity in your words. ***Ivy Rose |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you, Ivy. Your sweet poetic words are honey to my soul. ((Ivy)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 Wow!!! Oh my gosh, this read like a wonderful hymn or a song, this is marvelous! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, may you find all the greatest gift through eternity all around! I LOVE IT!!!  Love, Noah Eaton |
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Silver Streak Member Elite
since 2002-01-02
Posts 3625FL, USA |
Thank you sweet Noah for you loving thoughts. ((Noah)) -newell Sharing God's Love through perfectlovepoetry.com |
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