I will call your name, Lord

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I will call your name, Lord

Encarta
Member

since 2002-02-14

Posts 101
My homeland is not of the world

0 posted 2002-02-14 07:42 PM

I will call your name, Lord

You were always there for me
You gave me the will and strength to proceed
Even when I turned my back to thee
Lord, you were always there for me

You have guided me through my life
You have guided me away from the strife
You have always given me advice
Yet you have allowed me to roll my dice.

Snake eyes the dice has rolled
Now here I am growing old
Yet there you are, all the same
Waiting for me to call your name

Sorry, I'm not great with grammer, so I don't know what should be a comma, and what should be a period. But anyhow, what'd you think?

His Poet
Senior Member

since 2001-12-18

Posts 750

1 posted 2002-02-15 09:20 AM

Encarta, I don't study the punctuation very closely if the message keeps my attention and your message is very good. I think you've done an admirable job on this. Enjoyed. Cheryl

Silver Streak
Member Elite

since 2002-01-02

Posts 3625
FL, USA

2 posted 2002-02-15 10:08 AM

Encarta, thanks. I like this. A lot!

And I like your well chosen metaphor from 'shootin craps'.

Yet you have allowed me to roll my dice.
Snake eyes the dice has rolled

For anyone who doesn't know about shootin' craps, it is a gambling dice game where when both dice come up as one, the shooter loses.

Thanks for sharing,

Newell

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-02-15 07:48 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! WONDERFUL FIRST POST!!! BRAVO!!! Welcome to Passions, sweet Encarta, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely weords! We all love you so much! (big hugggsssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Encarta, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Heather Miller
Member

since 2000-07-19

Posts 409
Bryan, Ohio USA

4 posted 2002-02-15 09:51 PM

He is such a gentlemen and always waits for us to make the right move.
Beautifully written †
LITL,
Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

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