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L Tiuch
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0 posted 2002-01-09 10:38 PM



I see Him in the morning sun
And in the evening dew
I see Him in the rainbow
When the storm is through
I hear Him in the pounding surf
And in the summer breeze
I hear Him in the thunder
And the rustling of the leaves
I smell Him in the meadow
And in the garden's rose
I smell Him in the autumn
Before the winter's snows
I taste Him in the ocean
And in the sweetest peach
I taste Him in the orchards
And on the sandy beach
I feel Him in the gentle rain
And in the soft moonlight
I feel Him in the shadows
That surround me every night
He makes His presence known to me
His love and grace, my gift
And as my thanks to Him each day
In praise, my voice, I lift.

Linda Tiuch


© Copyright 2002 Linda Tiuch - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-01-09 11:46 PM


Linda, your praise poem is very beautiful. Thanks for sharing.
-newell

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2 posted 2002-01-10 04:32 PM


My eyes just flowed down the page.  Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2002-01-10 05:48 PM


Linda:  This is beautifully done and very uplifting to read.

Betty Lou Hebert

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4 posted 2002-01-10 06:21 PM


Very uplifting, beautiful , floria
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5 posted 2002-01-10 06:31 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, His love is in everything, and I'm always so blessed by all the beautiful things we are so fortunate to gaze upon! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, your words are always so edifying and lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Linda, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

L Tiuch
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6 posted 2002-01-10 08:20 PM


Thank you all for your kind words.  I take so many of God's gifts for granted that I sometimes tend to forget His presence in all that is around me. I am happy you enjoyed my poem.  Linda
L Tiuch
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7 posted 2002-01-10 08:21 PM


Thank you all for your kind words.  I take so many of God's gifts for granted that I sometimes tend to forget His presence in all that is around me. I am happy you enjoyed my poem.  Linda
L Tiuch
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8 posted 2002-01-10 08:23 PM


I think I need "remedial replying" 101...it always seems to duplicate itself...sorry.
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9 posted 2002-01-11 10:11 AM


L Tiuch, Praises to the Creator of all things are a blessing. Your poem has done that today. Amen. Cheryl
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10 posted 2002-01-11 06:43 PM


Wow Linda ~ What beautiful images you have brushed with your poet's pen... Flowed from first to last ~ look forward to seeing more.  Bonnie
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11 posted 2002-01-12 02:25 AM


If we all had eyes to see ears to hear and the senses of touch and taste this poet displays, we would all know that God is all around.  Joyce
L Tiuch
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12 posted 2002-01-12 05:52 PM


Bonnie, Joyce, and Cheryl...Thanks for taking the time to read and respond, your kind words are appreciated.  Linda
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13 posted 2002-01-15 03:06 AM


very beautiful i really loved this one.
robin<><

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14 posted 2002-01-16 05:04 PM


L Tiuch,

My Oh My this is lovely.  A poem for all my senses to indulge.  He certainly does have a way of fulfilling all of our senses with His Wonder, Majesty, and Grace.  Again, a very nicely flowing praise poem to our Lord.

-Bob

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15 posted 2002-01-16 06:07 PM


What a wonderful poem for all the senses, and for the spirit most of all!  Linda, the flow of your words just swept my eyes right through this poem.  What a beautiful psalm to our Lord!

Traci

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Ephesians 2:8-9

L Tiuch
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16 posted 2002-01-17 11:31 PM


Robin, Bob and Traci...Thank you for your kind words.  I am pleased you liked my poem.  Linda
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