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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2001-12-18 06:12 PM


Going the Mile

A room in just a simplistic place,
Your smile a mist of angelic grace,
Wise men walked to find a child,
As stars led them through the miles.

A wonderous journey did unfold,
Through our bibles we're foretold,
Eyes of journey light Our path,
Going the mile reduces man's wrath.


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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2001-12-18 06:16 PM


Yes, yes, and His love will guide us every step of the way to our destinies laid before us! (smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, the windows of your heart shine with love and courage! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful vision! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-19 09:47 AM



And each mile begins with the first step.  All steps should be considered the first, just in order to make the journey never ending...

well done!

His Poet
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3 posted 2001-12-20 11:55 AM


Lovely, short and sweet. What a journey and so well expressed. I enjoyed. Cheryl
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Member Rara Avis
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4 posted 2001-12-23 03:51 PM


An old story retold sweetly.  Joyce
strbbux
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5 posted 2001-12-23 03:59 PM


And what a beautiful journey it is, nice write, strbbux
BloomingRose
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6 posted 2001-12-29 09:51 AM


Well said! Really good poem.

Deb

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