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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind 
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Morning shine gives touch to the grass; Caring hands give joy to the world. Though fogs cloud the view of the hills, The valley of innocent can be clearly seen. Though four wheels trucks sadden the air, The smiles of the flowers brightens the day. //a caring hand, a smile save someone day. it doesn't need to be Christian to do good work. So what do you think about the poem? What title should I use? Love, |
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Trillium 
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Caring Hands is what sticks in my mind! Good job on this. Betty Lou Hebert |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Would the first line of the verse make a good title? Love, |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I like to give title's that are kind of short and tend to sum up what the poem is about, although not entirely, as I want people to be curious enough about the title to want to read it. How would "Morning's Touch" sound to you on this? Just a thought.. I think naming poems is one of the things I most enjoy doing about writing poetry, although I cannot tell you why, it's just my thing.. I like to name kittens and puppies.. When you name poetry you've written I guess it is sort of the same feeling, you are summing up a personality of the poem providing a hint of a description of what it is all about. |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
Thanks Songbird. I will use that title. Love, |
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