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BlackDove
Junior Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 18
Why are you reading this???

0 posted 2001-10-21 01:54 AM



So sad
That you took it so badly
And acted so madly
So scared
Like a baby by the morning
With the sunlight unfolding

Your eyes have turned red
and are holding
Me, inside your story
In the end
You'll be starting on a new one
Of anguish and delusions

He smiles like a magician
who's just cast his illusions
Of castles and sandstones
On the backbeach
and bright lights within your reach

The sounds of warning
by the morning
Of hound dogs coming for me

With the ropes leading back to your knees
And you, looking straight at me
On your knees in the rain
with a basket of flowers
just mourning

As the bells in the trees above
All swung and rang softly
You said you rang them for me
For me

Tomorrow never knows what it doesn't know too soon.  -Noel Gallagher

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Lighthousebob
Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
1 posted 2001-10-22 01:02 AM


It's pretty amazing.  I ask myself the same question over and over again also as I realize all that is done just for me.....?  Wow Me?  Your poetry is very graphic in a positive sense.  Thanks for sharing your talent with us and Welcome to Passions.  -Bob
Lennon2002
Junior Member
since 2002-01-10
Posts 31
The wV
2 posted 2002-01-16 02:12 PM


Nice imagry... empty,yet so full of ideas....

What would you say if I said to you, it's not in what you say, it's in what you do?

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
3 posted 2002-01-16 02:46 PM




(sigh) Soooooooo beautifully descriptive, sweet friend, may the bells ring on for all of us and fill us with faith and hope everyday! We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

strbbux
Member Elite
since 2001-12-19
Posts 3859

4 posted 2002-01-16 07:47 PM


Welcome to Passions, I love your imagry, floria
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