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WhtDove
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0 posted 2001-10-03 09:35 PM


Tears spill forth
Fear runs wild
Little ones cry
Fatherless child

Uncertainty brews
Confusion reigns
Tons of rubble
Covered remains

Volunteers work
Through the night
God is helping
Comfort fright

Lives cut short
Families broken
Strangers comfort
Words unspoken

World together
Nation unites
Side by side
In candle's light

God is watching
Answering prayer
Guiding His children
Up Heavens stair

[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 10-03-2001).]

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Poet deVine
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1 posted 2001-10-03 09:42 PM


This is beautiful..I love the image of God taking His children home up that staircase..
Suzanne Arlene
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2 posted 2001-10-03 09:48 PM


This just said it all Wonderful read  Suzanne
Denise
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3 posted 2001-10-03 09:55 PM


Very well expressed, Rebecca, very well indeed!
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4 posted 2001-10-04 12:21 PM


Very well said.

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2001-10-04 09:36 AM


WhiteDove~
The tears fall in such great numbers~
Someday ... maybe someday they will be lessened~

A lovely write~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Songbird
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6 posted 2001-10-04 09:39 AM


Enjoyed your poem..it encourages, reminding us evil will not trimph. God will use it for his good.
sunshinemist
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7 posted 2001-10-04 10:09 AM


Beautiful write! Thank you for sharing this.
Blessings to you.   warm smiles, ~Marie~

sandgrain
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8 posted 2001-10-04 10:50 AM


Lovely thoughts of our Creators constant care in the midst of chaos and heartbreak.  Well done.
Love, Mom

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Member Rara Avis
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9 posted 2001-10-04 11:38 AM


You have covered it all with few words and with the ultimate conclusion that God is still in charge.  Joyce
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10 posted 2001-10-04 09:07 PM


this is wonderful   and very touching  
WhtDove
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11 posted 2001-10-06 07:25 AM


Thank you all, each and everyone!  

God Bless

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