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A Tone of Voice
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since 2001-07-18
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0 posted 2001-08-04 11:13 AM



when love flows through my veins
and I know compassion
when beauty
is the child's eyes
soft chickadees and feather beds
when colors are three
dimensional, and perfectly round
when life has spiraled

prayer is my melody
God is my song

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Songbird
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1 posted 2001-08-04 11:41 AM


Very beautiful..I am glad to see a new poet on these pages.
Joyce Johnson
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Member Rara Avis
since 2001-03-10
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2 posted 2001-08-04 11:49 AM


Yes this is beautiful and welcome.  Joyce
illusion
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since 2001-06-19
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3 posted 2001-08-04 03:21 PM


Very beautiful and uplifting.  
Trillium
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Member Patricius
since 2001-03-09
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4 posted 2001-08-04 05:28 PM


It's a beautiful song too!  Welcome and hope to see more of your work.

Betty Lou Hebert

ShadowRider
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since 2001-07-14
Posts 1038
USA
5 posted 2001-08-04 06:31 PM


Could you write any more succintly or wonderfully
as this?  *smiling*  i think not, ATOV!

the last two lines were dazzling.
Nice to see you here,  real nice!  *soft smiles*

SR

A Tone of Voice
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since 2001-07-18
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6 posted 2001-08-05 10:59 AM


Songbird, illusion, Joyce Johnson, Trillium, and ShadowRider~!!

Thank you all so much, this seems like
a nice place to be...I'll be reading
and hopefully posting more in the
future.

*S*

ATOV

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