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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia ![]() |
No will, no strength My body mourns Events have passed But mind it scorns Thoughts a haze Vision’s blurred Where are my friends? Their voice, a word? Show your hand That I can hold Take me from My thoughts that scold Give me light For which to strive So once again I’ll feel alive |
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Joyce Johnson![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
Yes, when ever friends and loved ones are unreachable, God is still there. Joyce |
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neweyeday Junior Member
since 2001-07-12
Posts 19 |
the voice of the lost so fresh in my mind wanting to trade the empty for the fill well written |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Without vision, the people perish. I do pray that God has answered your prayer and given to you a precious hand to hold....... Bob <>< |
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Trillium![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Good poem! I hope you will find what you are seeking. Betty Lou Hebert |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Hello. Your poem is very soul searching. I do know that God didn't take the time to create a nobody. And someone does care. I admire you for reaching out in your writing. He is always there for you. Keep writing! Sincerely Rwood |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Nice poem. God will surely send you that friend in your hour of need. We all need that reassurance once in a while. Melton |
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