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Joyce Johnson
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0 posted 2001-07-11 11:05 PM


The poet rhapsodizes over the beautiful rose.
I admit he's right in saying that its sweet beauty shows
A God of many miracles, too great to understand,
So marvelous are the wonders fashioned by God's own hand.
The birds flying in the sky and charming us with their song,
Could only be from the One who protects them all day long.
The mountains, the meadow and stars that are shining so bright,
Were created by our Master, who gave us day and night.
But the greatest blessing we've received from our God above,
Is a gift he gives to all, the capacity to love.
He took a piece of his own heart and placed it in our own.
If we have tended to it well, it's taken root and grown.
And should we take a bit of ours to give to those we meet,
We'll find our own has only grown, and never shall deplete.
For it is not the being loved that brings the greatest bliss,
But giving out love of our own, a piece we'll never miss.

By Joyce 7/11/01  (I wrote this after our family reunion, where love flowed in abundance, handed down from our parents and originating with God.)

© Copyright 2001 Joyce I Johnson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-07-12 12:53 PM


Joyce:  A beautiful, loving poem. A real tribute to your family and the circle of love they share.

Betty Lou Hebert

neweyeday
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2 posted 2001-07-12 11:30 AM


attending where love abounds
like bathing in a warm ocean
baptized in electric energy

lovingly done..

neweyeday
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3 posted 2001-07-12 11:30 AM


attending where love abounds
like bathing in a warm ocean
baptized in electric energy

lovingly done..

Lighthousebob
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4 posted 2001-07-12 04:35 PM


I couldn't agree more.  I really liked the depth of this poem that has a great lesson to teach all who will read, heed, and put to use.....  This is such a tremendous truth, the greatest gift is Love.  Thank you for blessing us with Your words of love.  Bob <><
rwood
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5 posted 2001-07-12 08:41 PM


Hello.. and very nice to meet and read you too. Your poem is so right, in the sharing and giving of the love spinging eternal.
Sincerely,
Rwood

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6 posted 2001-07-12 09:14 PM


Joyce, this was beautifully written.

I love this part, as it's so very true...
quote:

But the greatest blessing we've received from our God above,
Is a gift he gives to all, the capacity to love.
He took a piece of his own heart and placed it in our own.
If we have tended to it well, it's taken root and grown.



All of it's true.  

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Our background and circumstances may have influenced who we are, but we are responsible for who we become.

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2dalimit
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7 posted 2001-07-14 06:14 AM


I read "The Reunion". It was great. And this one is even greater. You are truely blessed. I like your verse...If we have tended to it well, it's taken root and grown...
You are so right. Thank you for your writings.

Melton

ShadowRider
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USA
8 posted 2001-07-14 09:52 AM


Tis a most wonderful gift, that of the family love.

How many thousands of times have we not taken totally for gran-ite
the selfless offering of our famial ones, that absolutely had to sustain
us during duress, or sadness.

Its almost overwhelming, isnt't it...when they are all gathered together,
the laughing, the sharing, the ultimate Power of Love?  *soft smiles*  

My best to you.....SR

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