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scout
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since 2001-06-16

Posts 175
no place owns me

0 posted 2001-06-18 01:50 PM

If there is any hope...

Now come by my side,
Enter my life,
End the falling of the light,
Drown me in superfluity...

Just as He came,
Entering my life,
Suspending a simulacrum,
Urging my name,
Saving the day...

----xscoutx----
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears." -

MoeRocko
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since 2001-04-25

Posts 166
West Virginia

1 posted 2001-06-18 01:52 PM

Groovy!

If there's a such thing as a Genius, then I'm one. If there's no such thing then I don't care... ~John Lennon

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-06-18 02:08 PM

Hey great first post and welcome to Passions

Zu

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-06-18 02:14 PM

Hey,

Welcome to Passions! This is a good start I hope to see more just like it

check your email too. Until your next poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

the_rescue
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since 2001-05-23

Posts 316
Japan

4 posted 2001-06-18 02:30 PM

hey welcome to passions nice right hope to see more.

The Rescue

I'm not asking U 2 luv me I'm just letting out the truth no hold barred about what I feel nothing wrong with what I say

anonymous albert ?

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since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

5 posted 2001-06-18 02:53 PM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!...this is a very nice first post...i enjoyed it...thansk and hope tos ee you read sahre and reply more...bye

im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you?

angel_2401
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since 2001-06-12

Posts 131
Cincinnati, OH

6 posted 2001-06-18 02:57 PM

Great first post. Keep writing!

I don't have an attitude problem You have a perception problem.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

7 posted 2001-06-18 03:51 PM

Welcome to Passions! I really enjoyed this one! I hope to see you around more.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-06-18 04:40 PM

Welcome!

hope to see more from you

~SEA

Dr. Jo-Bizz
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since 2001-06-06

Posts 97

9 posted 2001-06-18 11:25 PM

hey scott....
what's a "simulacrum"...? i feel stupid. i can't find a dictionary in the dark either. i liked this. its short and potent. and its... happy. i wish i could write the happy kind. i always said i would if i ever wrote and now look at me *sobs pathetically*..

well take care and don't eat too many popsicles with out me.

dr. jo

But His word was in my heart
like a burning fire
Shut up in my bones;
I was weary of holding back,
And I could not.

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

10 posted 2001-06-19 10:00 AM

Welcome to Passions in Poetry. I liked this first post, and I look forward to reading more. Keep sharing your work with us.
Nicely done here.

--Marie

"Imagine a pageant...
In my head the flesh seems thicker,
Sandpaper tears corrode the filth,
And I need you now somehow." --Silverchair

FoxXena
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since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

11 posted 2001-06-19 05:29 PM

This is a great way of showing how God can change us positively. Wonderful work and welcome to Passions!

*+*Would you be known by everybody? Then you know nobody.~
-Publilus Syrus*+*

obscurity of cloud
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since 2001-05-11

Posts 294
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12 posted 2001-06-19 07:26 PM

this is great! welcome to passions. i hope to see a lot of you here.

"so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost

Cinch01
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 14
RS, BR

13 posted 2001-06-19 09:45 PM

Great poem! Keep writting!

scout
Member

since 2001-06-16

Posts 175
no place owns me

14 posted 2001-06-28 08:20 PM

i just wanted to tell people that this was an acrostic (and plus i want my pic to be on my poem!)

xscoutx
"Son of man with one blow I am about to take away from you the delight of your eyes. Yet do not lament or weep or shed any tears."-Eze.24:16

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