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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon

0 posted 2001-06-10 12:01 PM


Peter...
Weren’t you with them?
No, you are mistaken!

Didn’t I see you among the followers?
You are mistaken, I do not know Him!

You, you there!  Weren’t you among the group?
No, not I!  You must have seen someone else!

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I watched Him die!  I saw the nails in His hands and in His feet.  I saw the spear in His side.  I watched them take Him down and prepare Him for burial.  How can He be alive; and even if He were alive, how could I face Him after all I’ve done?  How can I look at Him after denying Him three times?  How?

Peter.

Lord!

Peter.

Lord, do not look on me, I am but a filthy rag, do not touch me I am unclean.

Peter.

Lord...

Peter, do you love Me?
Lord, you know I love You.
Then feed my lambs.
Simon, son of John, do you truly love me?
Yes, Lord, you know I love You.
Take care of my sheep.
Simon son of John, do you love me?
Lord, You know all things; You know I love you.
Feed my sheep. . . and Peter’s tears were as living water upon the ground as Jesus touched him and raised him up unto His service

© June 11,  2000
only that I was inspired to arrange it in this way...for most of it is straight from scripture:

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Songbird
Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184
Missouri
1 posted 2001-06-10 09:01 PM


Denial, so many ways to do it. We need that reminder to be faithful to the one we love. Good paraphrase, enjoyed.
deleeme
Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 1766
NEW ENGLAND, USA
2 posted 2001-06-12 07:28 PM


Peter is so us- or we are so much like Peter it is uncanny!  But, the truth is if Jesus could take such a man and use him so mightily in the Gospel, and He not also transform some of us modern day Peters as well??

A good sharing here,
      David

No Better Place do I know
Than where Hearts knit as
one,
For in that grand
experience,
The Better ALL become.

God Bless us All!!!

ellie LeJeune
Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2001-06-17 10:20 AM


Wonderfully written! And in our brokeness he heals and we become His strength...Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2001-06-17 10:26 PM


I wonder who among us has not been in this same position as Peter?  Excellent work, VAS.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

[This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 06-17-2001).]

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