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Sven
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0 posted 2001-06-02 11:15 AM


Darkness
that's how it begins
we gather huddled, lost
waiting for the light

Flame
pierces the dark night
offering us warmth and light
blessed and shared by us

Follow
light shows us the way
the way that leads to our peace
the way of the Lord

Exalt
sing Heaven's choirs
He has vanquished death and sin
dying for us all

Word
our story of life
from dark beginnings to death
and then to new life

Litany
calling on the Saints
God's holy men and women
to pray for us all

Water
the water of life
journey from death to new life
quench this thist for thee

Baptism
spirit of new life
fill the hearts of those who come
guide them home to you

Confirmation
profession of faith
made to the Church united
we now stand with you

Redemption
redeemed by water
the Cross that saves from sin
made now by our hands

Oil
the Oil of Chrism
seals by the Holy Spirit
the gift of our faith

Body and Blood
transformed by the Word
we share His body and blood
nourishing our soul

Light
journey now complete
the stone is now rolled away
we share the good news

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2001 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-06-02 11:52 AM


What a wonderful story.  Joyce
ellie LeJeune
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2 posted 2001-06-02 01:37 PM


Sven; You have penned a magnificent work of art and told the story of salvation in a unique and powerful way to inspire us all! Ellie

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GrapesRMine
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3 posted 2001-06-02 03:52 PM


I really liked the progression and joinder and the way you highlighted the theme of each stanza. Your witness of faith is very encouraging to the reader. Thank you.


Sven
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4 posted 2001-06-02 04:37 PM


Thank you for your wonderful responses. . .  

vigil. . . is a poetic response/meditation on the Easter Vigil service. . .

In the Catholic Church, Easter Vigil ranks as one of the most important days and rituals of the Church. . . during Easter Vigil, we recall where we have come from, where we are going, and welcome new people along the way. . .

The different verses represent the different sections of the service. . .from the total darkness that the church begins in, to the welcoming of new members of the Church (called Catechumens) and the renewal of our faith and baptism through fire, water, and the body and blood of Christ. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Songbird
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5 posted 2001-06-03 02:33 PM


Your faith very wonderfully expressed. Thanks for sharing.
WhtDove
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6 posted 2001-06-04 10:18 PM


Wonderfully done all the way around Sven!

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No Jesus, No Peace

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Lighthousebob
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7 posted 2001-06-07 01:46 PM


Sven,

Not a criticisim in any way.... Perhaps just me, but to me you have written each stanza in such perfect (5-7-5) form describing each term so well that I could have easily gotten lost in your artistry and neglected to acknowlege the significance of the "vigil" event itself... I took a deep breath of WOW and had to go back and re-read.   I suppose an element very similar to  the "Communion Service."  Anyway, I found the journey from darkness to His most glorious "Resurrection" light very stimmulating... and to reminisce on the sacrifices that were made for us to welcome us in to the Kingdom of God is such awe inspiring in the least.  Wonderful spiritually poetic expression.  Bob <><        

Isis
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8 posted 2001-06-07 10:59 PM


Quite inspiring Sven, written with such reverence and love, beautiful!!
Isis

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~Isis~~Sovereign of the Spirit.



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