Spiritual Journeys |
A Slight Prayer |
obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
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I feel i was on the cross next to Christ the day he questioned his forsaken realm, the day the blades grazed my sister's wrists. In the name of three brothers, i pray i beg forgiveness and something greater than understanding, something greater than intravenous resucitation. I've never believed that things happen that rhyme and reason are pomp and circumstance Instead, i seek divine purpose and strength i seek family, God, fulfilment in these worlds. I've sat through silent services of vicious gods and their vengeful followers, thankful for the knowledge that older sisters, suicidal, are forgiven, and not forsaken. "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is a very sad poem. I hope things are better. Joyce |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
He will comfort you and He has your sister in His Loving Arms...count on it! Ellie A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome to Spiritual! This was sad indeed, but glad that you know all can be forgiven. What better hands could we be in besides those of a loving God....none Again, welcome to the forums, glad to have you! <*\\\>< |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I too hope things are well with you. Welcome! PIP is indeed a comforting. It is my Happy Place. Melton |
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obscurity of cloud Member
since 2001-05-11
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Thank you for your replies. I really like this forum and i hope to read more of all of your work in the future! "so when at times the mob is swayed to carry praise or blame too far, we may choose something like a star" --Frost |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
God hears your prayer, and he understands your sorrow..You have written a beautiful expression of your feelings. Keep writing..I'll be reading. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
This is such a touching poem. I do hope your sister is in a better place emotionally and can find peace. Betty Lou Hebert |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
May He ease your burdens and help you to find the right path. Very sad writing. Never lose faith, He is always there with you. Always. All writing comes |
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