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Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

0 posted 2001-05-14 07:45 PM

It's morning and a yellow sky
Lights up the east and draws the eye,
To where the sun will soon appear.
The songs of all the birds I hear
Seem jubilant and joyful too,
At coming through the night to view
Another sunrise and to sing
Of happy things the day will bring
And as the color starts to grow,
The world takes on a golden glow,
That seems intense and quite unreal.
I look around me and I feel
This day is different from the rest
And by the time it paints the west,
I will have savored every hour
And brought some secret dream to flower.
With heart-felt gratitude I pray
To God who gave this lovely day!

Betty Lou Hebert

Published by Drury's Publishing 1996

[This message has been edited by Trillium (edited 05-14-2001).]

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

1 posted 2001-05-14 08:01 PM

God gives us these lovely days and we don't always appreciate them. Today is rainy and cool but the green is so brilliant with the raindrops it is quite beautiful. You wrote another lovely poem. Joyce

WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

2 posted 2001-05-15 09:43 AM

Whaahooooo! Lovely picture of God's wonder.

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Know Jesus, Know Peace
No Jesus, No Peace

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD

Kit McCallum

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since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2001-05-15 08:42 PM

Beautiful phrasing and imagery within this lovely message Trillium ... wonderful!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-05-16 07:07 PM

Thank you everyone for making such nice comments!

Betty Lou Hebert

2dalimit
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since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

5 posted 2001-05-17 06:38 AM

You paint a perfect picture.
Melton

Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

6 posted 2001-05-18 01:39 AM

Melton: Thank you for your comments.

Betty Lou Hebert

Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14

Posts 4725
California

7 posted 2001-05-25 07:33 PM

Trillium,

This certainly is the day that the Lord has made....... vibrant and golden. Your poem warmed my heart. Bob <><

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

8 posted 2001-05-25 09:47 PM

Bob: Thank you so much and glad it warmed your heart.

Betty Lou Hebert

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-05-27 12:19 PM

BettyLou~
You pen perfection in your rhyme~

'This day is different from the rest
And by the time it paints the west,
I will have savored every hour
And brought some secret dream to flower.'

Lovely, lovely, lovely ! ! !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

10 posted 2001-05-28 01:27 AM

Marge: Thank you so much! Your praise warms my heart!

Betty Lou Hebert

RebeccaJoy
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 35

11 posted 2001-05-30 08:30 PM

An outstanding reminder of what a gift each day is. Wonderful writing

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

12 posted 2001-05-30 11:19 PM

Rebecca: Thanks for reading and commenting and nice to see you posting on this site.

Betty Lou Hebert

Panne447
Member

since 2001-04-03

Posts 196
S.A. TX

13 posted 2001-05-31 02:28 PM

Trillium, Beautiful! Panne

BSC

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since 2000-02-04

Posts 2919
New York, USA

14 posted 2001-06-01 09:52 PM

Oh Wow Trillium ~ What a beautiful image this brought....just wonderful! Bonnie

Songbird
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since 1999-12-15

Posts 2184
Missouri

15 posted 2001-06-04 07:55 AM

What a wonderful way to start the day, reading your lovely poem. You really do have a way with words. I admire your talent.

Evylyn
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since 2001-06-04

Posts 20
Florida, USA

16 posted 2001-06-04 12:58 PM

*Smiles* The poem was beautiful, and the rhyme scheme very catchy. As said in an earlier reply, it does give you a wonderfully vivid image. =o}

"The only thing that boggles the mind is the mind itself."

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

17 posted 2001-06-04 07:00 PM

Panne447 and BSC: Thank you both for your very nice remarks. It's nice to hear that people enjoy what I write.

Betty Lou Hebert

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

18 posted 2001-06-04 07:02 PM

Songbird: Thank you for your compliment. I always say "God guides my pen" and I do believe it, so the credit is not really mine!

Betty Lou Hebert

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

19 posted 2001-06-04 07:03 PM

Evylyn: Welcome to the Forum! Glad to see you posting here and will read your work when I have a chance.
Thank you for your kind remarks. Hope you will enjoy this site.

Betty Lou Hebert

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