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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
The birds are singing gently As the leaves on branches blow Nature is exploding As I watch your wonders grow Brightness of the dandelion Against the grass so green Splashed with rainbow tulips Create your wonderous scene The luscious smell of lilac On the wind, come drifting through I'm wrapped in the aroma For it all, Lord, I thank you <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. I don't question YOUR existance - GOD [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 05-02-2001).] |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I felt this one. I love the beauty of God's creation, and you put it in words as well as imagery. Soooo pretty! Deb |
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Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
This is very lovely Wht Dove. Joyce |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Angel, this is beautiful and colourful. Had a serene feel to it my dear, Great writing! Maree |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
What a realistic spring picture you've worded, even colored, into this lovely verse. Thank you, Mom |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Very nicely written, I enjoyed it. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Oh Becky..not only is the poem beautiful, but the presentation is GREAT!!! I loved it. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you Deb. His creation is certainly beautiful. All seasons, but I happen to like the Spring, Summer (warm) months best. Thank you Joyce! Thank you Angel, now get writing. Glad it was to your liking Mom, thanks! Toni thank you for stoppin in and taking the time to read. Welcome to Passions! Sharon that means much, thanks so much. [This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 05-02-2001).] |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
You are singing my favorite kind of song! Lovely picture of Springtime!! |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Very refreshing and colorful. I enjoyed it a lot. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Thank you for sharing a beautiful image of GOD's creation. Melton |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
LOL thank you Songbird! Glad it could sing for you. I'm glad you did Betty, thank you! It's been far too long since I've written anything worth it. Thank you for sharing it with me Melton. <*\\\>< |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
This is really nice! I like the colours you added to it, great effect! What wonderful imagery, and a good, serene feel. A masterpiece. ~Allan Build a man a fire, and he's warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. |
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BSC
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ahhhh, beautiful Becky ~ Love the colorful touch...and the gentle feel of this sweet piece. Bonnie |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
White Dove, Very colorful words in more ways than one.... Bob <>< |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Thank you Allan for such a sweet comment. Thank you Bonnie! Glad to have you back around, you've been missed. Thank you greatly Bob! |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
wow!!...i really liked this poem..esp the colors that been added i thought that was very creative that gave the reader a stronger message across..great job and keep writing... ...? if i die before i wake , i pray the lord my soul will take-"when thugs cry" |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A lovely presentation to match the beautiful sentiments Becky, thank you for this tender and uplifting read! Best wishes, /Kit |
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