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Xeonox
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0 posted 2001-04-30 01:49 AM


Freedom is a virtue,
That you must earn,

It is not fought for-
In battles,

Or in a crowd,

The fight is within,
Divulging  is the means,

It brings with it-
The answer to all,

Achieving freedom at last.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

© Copyright 2001 Ronil B Tataria - All Rights Reserved
Joyce Johnson
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1 posted 2001-04-30 02:32 AM


Very good.  Confession is good for the soul.  Joyce
Lighthousebob
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2 posted 2001-05-01 09:45 PM


Yes, Freedom is a God given right.... Even during the years when Americans experienced physical slavery, the slaves expressed an inner freedom, like you have expressed, writing spirituals unto God that still remain enfluential in our culture today.  You have written a true reminder of what true freedom can be when a soul is in union with God.   Bob <><
WhtDove
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3 posted 2001-05-02 09:52 AM


Well stated! Nothing like Freedom within.

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


Xeonox
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4 posted 2001-05-02 06:22 PM


Thank you for the response guys. I wanted to write a poetry that showed the real meaning of freedom.

Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.)

sandgrain
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5 posted 2001-05-03 09:12 PM


How true it is!  There is no real freedom without inner peace.  Well done.  Thank you.
  Rae

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