Spiritual Journeys |
My Humble Limerick |
Joyce Johnson
since 2001-03-10
Posts 9912Washington State |
My life is what I bring To You my Savior King. On bended knee, I give You me. And this the song I sing. By Joyce 4/4/2001 |
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ellie LeJeune Member Elite
since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156King of Prussia, PA USA |
This is wonderful, Joyce A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
It's amazing what kind of meaning we can fit into such short space isn't it? Well done. I think I'm going to have to try my hand at this all ready. <*\\\>< |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Joyce, this is great! Thanks. Rae |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Very cute! I think you strayed a bit from the traditional take on this, from a narrative sense to an almost addressive sense. It suited the form very well! ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Well done Joyce. Betty Lou Hebert |
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