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Lighthousebob
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0 posted 2001-03-29 10:02 PM



2 X Millennium's Falcon

     Rock of Age's left in warp number nine
          Escaping desolation's steel cold as ice.

               Though Hell was red like sacrificial wine,
                    Rock of Age's left in warp number nine.

                    Ignoring past, communion says all is fine
               While spirits delved in mortal sacrifice.

          Rock of Age's left in warp number nine
     Escaping desolation's steel cold as ice.

-Robert E. Michaud Jr.-
                                                                              
                                                                          

© Copyright 2001 Robert E. Michaud Jr. - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 2001-03-30 03:06 PM


I love the layout! This one is really cool  
Rock of ages endures through all time.  

Allan Riverwood
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2 posted 2001-03-30 04:54 PM


Neat!  You did a fantastic job here.
How exactly did you get the spacing to work like that?  I've tried, but every time I do all the spaces go down to one.  For example, two Xs with twelve spaces between them shows up like this-
X            X

Great poem though, however you pulled it off.     The title drew me in.
~Allan

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Allan Riverwood
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3 posted 2001-03-30 04:54 PM


Oh it must be fixed or something...    I never noticed.
sandgrain
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4 posted 2001-03-31 02:10 PM


A new twist to another well written, intriguing piece.  You shed so much light on this forum, for which I'm very thankful, Bob.
    Rae

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