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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-14 07:06 PM



Lost in a corridor,
you walk.
Looking for Jesus,
I hope.
Through dark passages,
you loose diection.
Don't open the door,
if you're not sure.
He keeps calling,
but you can't reach him.
Perhaps, you can try the last door.
If you'll find him,
you will know,
in him you'll find it all.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2001-03-14 08:26 PM


Walker this is fantastic! We do find all good things in God. I like image of the 'maze' of life here.

<*\\\><

I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD


Lighthousebob
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725
California
2 posted 2001-03-15 05:17 PM


walker,

I get images of darkness from your poem..... long dark hallways with doors that blend in with the darkness.... and when the door to Jesus is opened all the dark space is filled with magnificent Light. Great poem. Bob <><

ellie LeJeune
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since 2000-01-10
Posts 4156
King of Prussia, PA USA
3 posted 2001-03-16 06:31 AM


Walker, this is a wonderful analogy of how life is dark and meaningless untill we open the door to our hearts and let in His Love and Light! Ellie

A friend hears the song in my heart, and sings it to me when my memory fails.

sandgrain
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662
Sycamore, IL, USA
4 posted 2001-03-18 08:15 PM


It's definitely the last door we have to try once we find Him! Yes, I groped a long time, but I actually didn't know it was Jesus I was looking for. Thank you for this offering. It painted a nice picture.
Rae

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